Today I unwrapped the box of life
Filled to the brim it was
With worldly gems and jewels
I thought I acquired it all
But my existence is yet so incomplete...
I desire for something more...something genuine
I yearn for a gentle stroke of love
In the times of unfaithful passions
Crave for a speck of truth
In the falsities of words and deeds
Searching for traces of faith
In the web of rationality and logic
Longing for a moment of peace
In the turbulence of minds n hearts
Get me a pure drop of tear
In the murky waters of emotions
Help me..
Time is running out !!!
Filled to the brim it was
With worldly gems and jewels
I thought I acquired it all
But my existence is yet so incomplete...
I desire for something more...something genuine
I yearn for a gentle stroke of love
In the times of unfaithful passions
Crave for a speck of truth
In the falsities of words and deeds
Searching for traces of faith
In the web of rationality and logic
Longing for a moment of peace
In the turbulence of minds n hearts
Get me a pure drop of tear
In the murky waters of emotions
Help me..
Time is running out !!!
14 comments:
Swati I CRIED reading this. Cos this is exactly how I feel right now!!
u asked me if Im not well? yes..not physically...emotionally. I feel so down in the dumps today girl. tnxx for being concerned.
*HUGZ* n TY!
Keshi.
Crave for a speck of truth
In the falsities of words and deeds---
thats so touchy and complete in expression
thats a masterpiece swati !!!
time is really running out we all know but still cluster of materialistic world don't leave us easily
going thru the way of spirituality
Wow!!! This is beautiful. It was really worth waiting for your blog to be updated.
"Get me a pure drop of tear
In the murky waters of emotions"
I know how difficult it is to find that genuine concern in today's world.
But need not worry; friends are here to help. So cheer up and keep your focus on exams... just one week left. All the best!!!
I am in awe after reading this one...and am thinking hard of words to say what i want to..The eternal run of man in todays mechanical world, for god knows what...where emotions such as love, care, warmth just disappear..get trampled upon..and yet thats what drives us..thats ALL thats needed...infact was thinking about the tear today morning...i heard that it helps one to detoxify one self or so to say...and yet it isnt easy!!..this is an amazing post....**Today I unwrapped the box of life
Filled to the brim it was
With worldly gems and jewels
I thought I acquired it all
But my existence is yet so incomplete...** &
**Get me a pure drop of tear
In the murky waters of emotions** are the greatest expressions i feel....
PS: M kind of brain dead and hence the lack of posts at my end & going thru a bit of a ruf road too!!...but you are the writer..and just incase you dint realise you need to around much more(I know you are busy in the prep...but be back after that:-)..and all the best for the toiling days)
Just incase you dint realise..that was really insulting:-p...i claim right to Delhi by birth:-)...kind-f love to love that place..
I was just kidding yaar...plez..nothing serious:-)...all in good humour:-)..l catch up with the great writer once m there!
hi swati
"Get me a pure drop of tear
In the murky waters of emotions"
very hard to get but not impossible. your search is everybodys search. all of us in the same boat. and thnx swati for appreciating my blog.
lovely poem, really heartfelt. Genuine emotions are precious and priceless, aren't they?
btw, I'm adding you to my blog-roll, is that OK with you?
swati i m sorry..i dint get it....
"Get me a pure drop of tear"
Swati! Between you and Keshigirl.. :( I'm longing for things I have no right wanting.
Wassup? Long time no post...too busy elsewhere? hope to read you verse (and view your art) soon. Take care!
Truth gives peace for mind and heart. Genuine our tear drops, it exists for all. For peace wishes.
WB luv!
Keshi.
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