There she was, elegantly placed on the wooden chair by the big window, looking out at the skies. There was nothing particularly interesting about the sky or the moon today. Infact, it was rather dreary & sombre, aptly reflecting her state of mind.
Yet, she looked above, simply coz she lacked the courage to face the battered remnants – the multicoloured threads & the associated/attached varied thoughts resting in her lap.
It wasn’t too long ago that she had been sitting at the same place, cosily wrapped in the silken fabric of her dreams & desires.
It wasn’t too long ago that she had been sitting at the same place, cosily wrapped in the silken fabric of her dreams & desires.
It had taken her immense patience, tender care, oodles of love and brilliant imagination to weave the two threads together and create a relationship so exquisitely beautiful.
Ohh! How she looked forward to each day of embellishing the thread work with those beautiful coloured beads n pearls.. How much she cherished the way it caressed her..
Cuddled & comforted her..
But what had gone wrong?
But what had gone wrong?
Somewhere, she had been so consumed with the nectar of love and completely blinded by its wondrous pleasures that she failed to notice the loose threads...
Lost in the thought of building a picture perfect relationship, she lost sight of the reality of life..
One loose thread has the capacity to unknot the complete relationship...
One loose thread has the capacity to unknot the complete relationship...
34 comments:
well said...
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What a poignant way of expressing pain. I guess all of have some loose threads of regret and broken dreams in our lives. But then, it's the sharp blinding pain of such loose threads which make the rest of the tapestry of life such a blessed experience, I feel.
beautiful!
**Lost in the thought of building a picture perfect relationship, she lost sight of the reality of life..
I can so relate to that! many ppl do that...
Keshi.
Rahiman Dhaaga prem ka, Mat todo chatkaye
Toote se phir naahi jude, jude ganth pad jaaye...
I agree.
I wonder how u connected the thread. If we get seek, we could find loose threads between anything, but not a break apart.
Welcome you back :)
Beautifully crafted piece of writing!Sometimes,we just fail to see what went wrong.
Nice blog! :)
Wow. This is deep!
The last sentence said it all....just one thread...cos at times i feel that thread mite be the most insignificant one..but with time the error just multiplies...so much that beyond a point it no longer is insiginificant....gr8 thot and gr8 expression..expresses what one can feel at such a time aptly.Personally, i never understood the prefect solutions to avoid those threads from coming out;but something which helps is; if either speaks up/accepts/realises about that "one" thread and tries to fix it up conscientously...
PS:-Rmablings above mite not make any sense what-so-ever;kindly ignore!
@ Scribblers..
Thanks!
@ Sucharita..
Yes, we all have loose threads hanging.. its a natural outcome..its imp to understand & correct them well in time, so as to experience beautiful longlasting relationships..
@ Keshi..
Thanks! :)
@ Hobo..
Thanks for dropping by..
Those lines r beautiful..they r d essence of this post..
Thanks! :)
@ Jeevan..
Yes, What you said is absolutely right! :)
Thanks!
@ Sameera..
Thanks so much for d lovely words :)
Keep visiting!!
@ Solitaire..
:)
@ Sid..
Hey Sid! Im so glad that you perfectly got what i was trying to say here..n i completely got what you said..
***cos at times i feel that thread mite be the most insignificant one..but with time the error just multiplies...so much that beyond a point it no longer is insiginificant....***
yes..exactly what i meant.. :)
beautiful lines.. especially loved the last one
**One loose thread has the capacity to unknot the complete relationship
thats so much true and yet so difficult to realize at times
things always go wrong...but we dnt always come to know what went wrong
loose threads .....so brilliant concept u applied ....but then loose threads are all part and parcel of our life ....how to avoid them ....
wondering
@ Lena..
Hi!! Yes.. very true.. its too difficult to realize it most of the times..n it makes us really helpless..
@ Vishv
Hey Samby!! So good to hv u on my blog after ages..how have u been?
Yup..true Samby.. ther r bound to be loose threads..n we often dont knw wht to do abt them..then i guess it boils down to how strong is d relationship..does it manage to crack under the burden or grows even more strong..
@ Sayani..
We certainly can't avoid them.. we can only work on it, correct it & help the relationship grow more beautiful.. :) practically, its a lot tougher i know..bt whn were things in life easy.. :)
Cheers!
Never thought loose threads could convey so much in life... You really expressed things very well... Really beautiful.
Thanks for blogrolling,you are blogrolled too :)
beautifully written!!!
nice blog!!
hey good blog this one.
@ i walk alone..
thanks buddy! :)
@ Sameera... :) :)
@ rahul..
Welcome!! thanks a lot.. :)
@ buzz..
welcome to my blog.. thanks a bunch!
Hi ,
I was reading ur blog posts and found some of them to be wow.. u write well.. Why don't you popularize it more.. ur posts on ur blog ‘Unraveling Sentiments’ took my particular attention as some of them are interesting topics of mine too;
BTW I help out some ex-IIMA guys who with another batch mate run www.rambhai.com where you can post links to your most loved blog-posts. Rambhai was the chaiwala at IIMA and it is a site where users can themselves share links to blog posts etc and other can find and vote on them. The best make it to the homepage!
This way you can reach out to rambhai readers some of whom could become your ardent fans.. who knows.. :)
Cheers,
long time...
Scribblers Inc.
That was amazingly written. The best part of the post was the picture.. loved it :))
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